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Eŋg · 08-21-2013, 08:33 PM

whattup namix. i think the written style i see you're with equipped with... you've refined over many a year. i can appreciate its ostensible simplicity but deceptive depth... treading shallow waters then realising you can't swim. but yo, i haven't read a lot from you, but what i have is similar. re-purposed proverbs. proverbially... put in some pinches of your personal philosophy, sell it to the reader with a nursery rhyme rhythm. you're good at what you do, would like to see you just go nuts and experiment. not a flex, i mean you can if you want, but it gets to the point your verses familiarity feels predictable. you got skills, let them dictate to you instead of dictating to them. know what i mean? idk what i mean. just write.

the bottom line is the kinda mind, not the kinda rhyme.

pz namix.

08-21-2013, 08:33 PM	#1
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	whattup namix. i think the written style i see you're with equipped with... you've refined over many a year. i can appreciate its ostensible simplicity but deceptive depth... treading shallow waters then realising you can't swim. but yo, i haven't read a lot from you, but what i have is similar. re-purposed proverbs. proverbially... put in some pinches of your personal philosophy, sell it to the reader with a nursery rhyme rhythm. you're good at what you do, would like to see you just go nuts and experiment. not a flex, i mean you can if you want, but it gets to the point your verses familiarity feels predictable. you got skills, let them dictate to you instead of dictating to them. know what i mean? idk what i mean. just write. the bottom line is the kinda mind, not the kinda rhyme. pz namix.