God Complex

Lars · 02-06-2013, 06:46 AM

I'm not sure I got a lot of the content, liked the flow in parts though, seemed far too scattered content wise and jumped around a lot from one idea to the next. It probably sounds a whole lot better than it reads. This isn't really my thing though, best line for me would have been the Torah's horror / Qu'ran's quandary etc but little aside from that stood out to me. I didn't get the Frankenstein reference at all, tbh.

No hate, just my opinion.

Keep that pen moving!

02-06-2013, 06:46 AM	#1
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809298	I'm not sure I got a lot of the content, liked the flow in parts though, seemed far too scattered content wise and jumped around a lot from one idea to the next. It probably sounds a whole lot better than it reads. This isn't really my thing though, best line for me would have been the Torah's horror / Qu'ran's quandary etc but little aside from that stood out to me. I didn't get the Frankenstein reference at all, tbh. No hate, just my opinion. Keep that pen moving! __________________ PROVEN BITER