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08-18-2013, 10:54 PM
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I'M A MONSTER!
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 1,555
Battle Record: 77-13
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - Battle Arena
- 1-2 Punch League (2x)
- The Quick & The Dead II
- BA Swag & Flow Tournament
- 1-2 Season 3
- NBL Season 6
- The Elements
- Fall Brawl II
- Netcees Battle League (4x)
- NBL Season 9
- Summer Classic VII
- 50+ Wins
- The Winter Classic
- Tag Team Tourney
-1-2 Punch League
Rep Power: 20257523   |
Flo-
Would've like to see multiples with more syllables. Concepts weren't great but you did show some signs of swag. Wording was off tho...like when you used trap twice in the same line. Atomic- Your multis and flow were better than Flo's. Content wise there wasn't anything that stood out. There wasn't much imagery or wordplay or anything like that. Content wise I'd prolly edge it to Flo but Atomic had a cleaner written verse with the multis and flow. So he gets it Atomic. |
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