Week 4 - Word vs VERITAS - DRAWN

Nigma · 08-18-2013, 09:14 PM

Gat damn

veritas loved your opener and your rhymescheme throughtout for the most part. Enjoyed the back and forth with the time line always makes things interestinger. Messaging on my phone so if it looks like im making up words its because I dont feel like backspacing. Overall solid verse and more technically sound then I you've been. Thug life

word sup word. Liked your perspective on this and how you had a u unique spin to an otherwise generic topic. Some nice one liners and solid flow throughout. No big complaints but nothing stood out tremendously.

Both verses had there strong points. Two good conceptual pieces. However I feel this is incredibly close and since ties have been incorporated in this league I will vote in that direction, the winner is the readers.

+1 Nigma

08-18-2013, 09:14 PM	#14
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Gat damn veritas loved your opener and your rhymescheme throughtout for the most part. Enjoyed the back and forth with the time line always makes things interestinger. Messaging on my phone so if it looks like im making up words its because I dont feel like backspacing. Overall solid verse and more technically sound then I you've been. Thug life word sup word. Liked your perspective on this and how you had a u unique spin to an otherwise generic topic. Some nice one liners and solid flow throughout. No big complaints but nothing stood out tremendously. Both verses had there strong points. Two good conceptual pieces. However I feel this is incredibly close and since ties have been incorporated in this league I will vote in that direction, the winner is the readers. +1 Nigma __________________