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Old 08-17-2013, 06:01 AM   #10
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HOLY FUCKING SHIT AT HAVING TO SCROLL ON THE PHONE DOWN TO MIKE'S PICTURE AHAHAHA!!!!

Pinot Grij merked it, absolutely love his style, think he has an amazing turn of phrase and wording that can make even the darkest subjects light hearted because of the humour he injects, reminds me of Louis Logic in that respect, thought he could have done more with the topic this week and the piece felt a little underdeveloped this week compared to his last but the opening was great, mechanics and everything on point, there's little I can tell him to improve on, he knows his lane and does it well. Mike had less on the technical front this week but his originality never faulters, I guarantee noone has seen one wrote to this topic before, it was pure insanity! A great story, at one point with the lotion I thought he masturbated with the puppet on. Im weird, I know. FUCK! I liked both verses here, two spectacular takes to the same topic, both out of their minds creatively, but Im giving it to Mike here based on his feeling the more complete. Battle of the week. I love you guys.
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