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Old 08-08-2013, 01:14 AM   #381
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August baby, late bloomer. Honest, I literally just missed the call,
to be the brave loser, conversating with brain stupors sitting in the hall.
to be the paint gradient scathing the grooves in the city school wall.
Didn't make the grade before school started. I literally, just missed a call.
I'm residually, the basis for her fall. Echolocations, waterfall, monorail,
the Autolog Saws-all. Gator jaws, contrails, broad daylight alchemist in automail.
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Old 08-08-2013, 11:40 AM   #382
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It all just pales in comparison when you fall from grace and embarrassment always takes up the mantle when you least need it to keep reaching. Breathe. Feeding the negatives only seems to breed jealousness.
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Old 08-08-2013, 06:54 PM   #383
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Vehicular content in a miniature conquest, sitting in the cockpit
waiting to deliver it to congress, rappers is equivalent to harmless
mention rhymes again will turn the pissin' into my pisser's measurement contest
...get it...I promised, they could get their kittens wet & withered so stop it...
who sent Mr. Smithers to get on this, You'll see how it burns if we continue on kid...
shit...I just lost my train of thought over this miniature train I bought
Monopoly King I brought the fame and cause riding with the reigns on force
tugging at this bitches I'm riding tryna peep the sideview
I'm like bitch you know this shit's thick why you think I'm deep inside you
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Old 08-08-2013, 09:53 PM   #384
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Old 08-08-2013, 10:19 PM   #385
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Old 08-09-2013, 12:56 AM   #386
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it's cool, just follow the path- already feel as hollow as glass
break me. sick of waiting w/this bottle to crash. articles. trashed
shorts stained w/Marlboro ash. Wave as the particles dance
Like to keep it short 'n sweet. We all know how a corpse can cling
Almost annoying as doors that squeak or dorks & geeks
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Old 08-09-2013, 01:03 AM   #387
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Like I said before, my fucking storage leaks
Bums never get as clean as Portland streets
Pictures follow you around, as Norman peaks
My soul as wore down as a poor man's feet
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Old 08-09-2013, 07:26 PM   #388
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Addicted to the fast lane, sitting back stage
laughing at the kids jumping over for a handshake
like I give a fuck though, it's all luck folks
kick a decent flow, hoping it would give your bucks growth
dreams shot like Bambi, thought they'd never understand me
mistook my slick maneuver and hit the edge of the bad street
stuck in...memory lane where all you hoped never would change
turn out worst then you expected... and you think..never again
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Old 08-10-2013, 01:59 PM   #389
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Lamborghini's, ladies and millions is all wish/
Meet a genie who would fulfill these things,instead i flipped the middle/
Cus he rubbed me the wrong way"What are u saying kid!!?"/
is I just I don't fuck" uh - huh.." I burn these blunts till my conscious shuts/
show up to the club with clubs and club every big breasted slut
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Old 08-13-2013, 02:50 PM   #390
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WATCHIN FOR FALLIN PIANOS WHILE IM WATCHIN SOPRANOS
GET MONEY UP PUT PUSSYS DOWN LIKE BONPENSIERO
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Old 08-13-2013, 03:00 PM   #391
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@Split Eight right into the corner, grip fate like its a disorder,
I've ripped faith on sick days but this way I can do postmortem.
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Old 08-14-2013, 03:53 PM   #392
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I wanna, drop faces till my rhymes melt,
rock more cocaine than Winehouse,
and if I drop dead yesterday- my medic state
will be more morbid grace than pathetic lie-down.
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Old 08-14-2013, 04:05 PM   #393
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I wanna, snort lines to enhance my imagination,
transform lions into a man with claws.
Conform with time until I stand there sedated
by a storm of flies that'll condemn us all.
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Most of these men have always been in these enclosed cells
Repent for their sins, attempt to change the reflection of self
Yet most of them i'm noticing, fail to break that connection to hell
The department of correction, collects them, expecting it'll help
Let's build a criminal school and deliver em food a dog wouldn't eat
Chain em, keep each convict on leash to teach them how to be(neat!)
Seperate each of the dudes by race, affiliation, and sexual views
Hire a crew of corrupt guards to patrol the tiers and plush yards
Enable the perspiring fear and rivalry sneer to callus the hard

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Not long ago, the Winter snow built a throne,
God's role was overthrown by a shield and sword.
A glass of wine was over filled by the devil's drone,
the last time God shouldered guilt - special no more.
Demons burned the sky, the kingdom jeopardized,
freedom turned to lies, the reasons were crystallized.
Faith was a nostalgic bliss, erased by passionate sins,
fate would lead a tragic end, sprayed by leviathan's mist.
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Carnivorous extinct, my consciousness is falling apart,
monstrous killings, something ominous is calling my heart.
Sittin' on habits, television static gnawing at my nerves,
wishing for passion when trafic is blocking the herd.
A glass shatters, I gasp faster than a newborn baby,
I dash backwards to drag after the queue formed lately.
Walk into the kitchen, shocked by a smitten wife,
God isn't listenin' as she's dropped by a submissive strike.
A freak with his teeth deep in her arteries,
I reach for his sleeve but she can't hardly breathe.
Punches rain on his stomach and face,
stuck a blade through his fuckin' brain.
As I fall to my knees, begging God please,
she says she loves me, then is off to peace.
My tears drench her cheeks, I feared this for weeks,
guess I'll bury her body, the idea shears me deep.
As I attempt to wrap her in a sheet, she finds a breath,
and the woman of my dreams bites my neck.
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Old 08-15-2013, 06:58 PM   #397
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I got, suckers tryna spin in my execution
like I bred em into students, left as a nuisance
read up on the craft & said I'm a Judas
but I'm beheading the dead taking head's of the losers
more in the swing of things than y'all medical rumors
testicle tumors, I'm not upset it's just humorous
I'm nothing but a threat introducing you to a bed full of tulips
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its that flow the whole line shit. that quote on quote fly shit. the most engrossed rhyme slick, overdosed high spit. holy smokes I'm sick, and coast to coast i rip. From Okotoks where i live to the Poconos Islands. motorboat fly chicks for those with most sized tits. no one knows why its just protocol i guess....
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Flow is all a mess. Never is this author's pen dragging.
Pull a sword from my stoned mind: Arthur Pendragon.
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Listen Mary...what you make go round...
sticks with me forever and I won't go out...
no I won't run out, when I get high up
you like to go down...
no doubt...

but now I'm deliberately skipping town without you
I'm doubtful you'd understand, so I'm not about to...
no...don't say a word, show no doubt...& don't speak
in your mind is where I stay but your heart is where you hold me
I'm moving to my own beat..we in different hospitals
basically when you are this broken..that recovery shit's impossible
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