Egotistic, check it

Lost in Thought · 08-14-2013, 10:10 PM

I'm A egotistic, deep flow spitt'n, beast so vicious
People witness deeds so wicked cuz im evil with it
Three slow minutes till these folks sleep'n,but really you see throats leak'n
The weak go missin cuz I need no reason to leave hoes bleed'n

Its an improper fraction for these rappers actin to be on top of me
Impossible action w/o lots of subtraction cuz I hang above like appostrophies
Thats basic math and english class say'n yall aint as hot as me
Can't 'clock' my speed lookin down at your feet instead of 'watch'n me

They say under pressure pipes will break
But thats also the conditions a diamonds made
So when I shine today its cuz I'm that type of great
Greatness is for the making but its mine to take

Flex'n for fun while connect'n some puns
I'd decapitate a bum to get a'head' of a chump
I'd mount it on my wall with the rest of the cunts
That I played like a game then "Left For Dead" when I'm done

Nigma · 08-15-2013, 05:44 PM

Solid flex Lit looking good. Not quite at the peak I remember you at but deff getting that the rust off. Some really nice flow throughout and a couple dope plays. Felt the clock/watch was kind of a stretch but 'get ahead of this chump' was nice followed by a nice closer. People sleepin on ya @Lost in Thought

Split · 08-15-2013, 05:50 PM

This is like your fifth drop w/out feed, closed

Split · 08-16-2013, 12:51 AM

Open, thanks for being a good dude

CopyPat · 08-16-2013, 01:09 AM

hahahah. wicked man. short and sweet. raelly good scheming with some meaning behind the punches or puns as u say. the content itself was nothing new but yeah the wordplays were cool. im loving the amount of people around this board that DON'T write simple 1 2 word raps or 2 3 syllables.. so sick how much different the landscape is now compared to when i first started this shit. amazing

stay up man. ur style is fun to read, keep readin dudes around here and u will get more polished. u have the raw talent but u seem a little green, and probly greened out too haha

no but like ur vocab is real basic and there doesn't seem to be a whole lot of time put into this. would be dope to see u expand urself and attempt a bit more complex stuff. regardless i like this, stay around

Maximus · 08-16-2013, 03:47 AM

Cool, short flex piece.. Really flowed smoothly with no bumps at all, simple vocabs and some played out wordplays but it wasnt really a bad piece..stay up dude

Vulgar · 08-17-2013, 02:46 PM

Nice work man, I miss this traditional, cocky multi-based flex. I can appreciate it because it brings me back to my early days when I was just getting into writing on Rapflava which was a very active forum at the time. This was a brief yet shining example of the products that era offered. Thanks for the nostalgia.

Keep doing you

08-14-2013, 10:10 PM	#1
Lost in Thought Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 70 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 34	Egotistic, check it I'm A egotistic, deep flow spitt'n, beast so vicious People witness deeds so wicked cuz im evil with it Three slow minutes till these folks sleep'n,but really you see throats leak'n The weak go missin cuz I need no reason to leave hoes bleed'n Its an improper fraction for these rappers actin to be on top of me Impossible action w/o lots of subtraction cuz I hang above like appostrophies Thats basic math and english class say'n yall aint as hot as me Can't 'clock' my speed lookin down at your feet instead of 'watch'n me They say under pressure pipes will break But thats also the conditions a diamonds made So when I shine today its cuz I'm that type of great Greatness is for the making but its mine to take Flex'n for fun while connect'n some puns I'd decapitate a bum to get a'head' of a chump I'd mount it on my wall with the rest of the cunts That I played like a game then "Left For Dead" when I'm done __________________ Look up to the sky to try n find god in the clouds Hopin when he looks down I dont get lost in the crowd

08-15-2013, 05:44 PM	#2
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,724 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595810	Solid flex Lit looking good. Not quite at the peak I remember you at but deff getting that the rust off. Some really nice flow throughout and a couple dope plays. Felt the clock/watch was kind of a stretch but 'get ahead of this chump' was nice followed by a nice closer. People sleepin on ya @Lost in Thought __________________

08-15-2013, 05:50 PM	#3
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899396	This is like your fifth drop w/out feed, closed __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

08-16-2013, 12:51 AM	#4
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899396	Open, thanks for being a good dude __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

08-16-2013, 01:09 AM	#5
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	hahahah. wicked man. short and sweet. raelly good scheming with some meaning behind the punches or puns as u say. the content itself was nothing new but yeah the wordplays were cool. im loving the amount of people around this board that DON'T write simple 1 2 word raps or 2 3 syllables.. so sick how much different the landscape is now compared to when i first started this shit. amazing stay up man. ur style is fun to read, keep readin dudes around here and u will get more polished. u have the raw talent but u seem a little green, and probly greened out too haha no but like ur vocab is real basic and there doesn't seem to be a whole lot of time put into this. would be dope to see u expand urself and attempt a bit more complex stuff. regardless i like this, stay around __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

08-16-2013, 03:47 AM	#6
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169469	Cool, short flex piece.. Really flowed smoothly with no bumps at all, simple vocabs and some played out wordplays but it wasnt really a bad piece..stay up dude

08-17-2013, 02:46 PM	#7
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317	Nice work man, I miss this traditional, cocky multi-based flex. I can appreciate it because it brings me back to my early days when I was just getting into writing on Rapflava which was a very active forum at the time. This was a brief yet shining example of the products that era offered. Thanks for the nostalgia. Keep doing you