Above the Rest: "Talkin over heads"

PancakeBrah · 08-15-2013, 01:40 PM

Not really, as the title and first bar screams jilted lover. But I'll carry on. This piece was enjoyable to read aside from my previous point, if not lacking a little oomph.

namix · 08-15-2013, 01:46 PM

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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

Not really, as the title and first bar screams jilted lover. But I'll carry on. This piece was enjoyable to read aside from my previous point, if not lacking a little oomph.

drawin inspiration from whatever i can doggy

08-15-2013, 01:40 PM	#1
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Not really, as the title and first bar screams jilted lover. But I'll carry on. This piece was enjoyable to read aside from my previous point, if not lacking a little oomph.