"Small Talk", Vulgar // Split Eight

oats · 08-15-2013, 01:08 PM

this was dope, I enjoyed a lot of the references and homages to film and literature. Despite the monsoon of imagery from both of you, I was impressed to see the "Small Talk" topic consistently resurfacing and emerging, providing an emotional context for what was an otherwise bbq of skewered intellectualism. The uncomfortable awkwardness of poorly hitting on a chick. That's how I read this, at least, like a stream of consciousness while a dude was nervously running game. In any case, I liked this one a lot, good shit.

08-15-2013, 01:08 PM	#4
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	this was dope, I enjoyed a lot of the references and homages to film and literature. Despite the monsoon of imagery from both of you, I was impressed to see the "Small Talk" topic consistently resurfacing and emerging, providing an emotional context for what was an otherwise bbq of skewered intellectualism. The uncomfortable awkwardness of poorly hitting on a chick. That's how I read this, at least, like a stream of consciousness while a dude was nervously running game. In any case, I liked this one a lot, good shit.