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Old 08-09-2013, 05:58 AM   #1
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I actually LOL'd at the end of Serpent's verse, humourous way to take the topic and turn it on it's head, thought some of the scheming was dope mechanics wise but at times it seemed convuluted to me, which wasn't a major thing, but enough to be noticeable. Lines like this were bananas though:

Quote:
It's obvious this imposter is no novice in
the form of ominous homicidal postulates.
Just rolling off the tongue effortlessly, flow was slick right through, and everyone enjoys a good Canadian insult. :)


Mike Wrecka again here surprised me, I knew he was capable of big things, but he even outshone his verse from last week about the Khazaar's. His take on the topic this week is what was refreshing, thought the piece was riddled with little gems like this one:

Quote:
I want super sized servings of ammonium aspartate,
as I try all the sides of triglycerides that my body can tolerate,
and its only a dollar? great!,
that made me laugh. really enjoyable verses from both camps, shame there has to be a loser in battles like this when both brought it, but going with purely who's I found more enjoyabble and without getting into who was technically the better of the two etc and geeking out - I'm edging this to Mike Wrecka, Serp was ill though, love his style, hit me up for a collabo or whaetever duke!
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