Bearings

[Vulgar]

This feedback will be brief, unlike my boxerz. You're making strides with out-of-the-box imagery and abstract tracts, touching on a league of visually stimulating areas in expression, wordplay, example. I found myself enjoying it without the need to decipher a plot, because I assumed it'd be vague in that sense, yet clear in the sense that there was some intention in the pinstriped fog. Would you believe it if I told you that all masks are counterfeits of real personalities?

In loving jest, confess I love you.. infinity+ an integer.
Figures that, you were always prettiest as a miniature.
My city skyline silhouette. Eyes cinnamon-centered obsidian.
The way diamonds are the forever moment floating on your fingertips,
Holding onto innocence, a ring, a jewel, a wedding gift,
The closing pause, slowly dozing off in closing all your sentences.
^I was really impressed w/ these, esp. what's bolded.

Keep huey jew