Week 3 - Pinot Grij v Pent uP - PG WINS

08-08-2013, 08:44 PM

Pinot - as ive already indicated ur verse was hilarious to me. Im usually not fond of the set up u used, but u executed it extremely well. You gave ur characters mad personality, and the smilies helped. Flow was it was smooth, and seamless... it almost read like a natural conversation between two parties..and despite it being lengthy it still kept me engaged. I really enjoyed the read.

Pent uP - You also wrote a really well crafted verse. Each stanza complimented oats (or vice versa if urs proceeded his.) You had some dope concepts in there as well...bad habits/steak/ face to face feuding/death stares, just to name a few...flow was also real smooth, and read fluidly. Verse was definitely good, but I just felt that pinot's approach and wording kinda took this for him.

Vote - Pinot

08-08-2013, 08:44 PM	#7
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	Pinot - as ive already indicated ur verse was hilarious to me. Im usually not fond of the set up u used, but u executed it extremely well. You gave ur characters mad personality, and the smilies helped. Flow was it was smooth, and seamless... it almost read like a natural conversation between two parties..and despite it being lengthy it still kept me engaged. I really enjoyed the read. Pent uP - You also wrote a really well crafted verse. Each stanza complimented oats (or vice versa if urs proceeded his.) You had some dope concepts in there as well...bad habits/steak/ face to face feuding/death stares, just to name a few...flow was also real smooth, and read fluidly. Verse was definitely good, but I just felt that pinot's approach and wording kinda took this for him. Vote - Pinot