Round 2: PancakeBrah vs. Pryde {PancakeBrah wins}

SiK · 08-07-2013, 09:22 PM

On phone sorry

Cake... definitely felt the imagery here. You took an interesting route. I could actually picture myself on a boardwalk tho lke jersey shore. Good story bro. Details are key imo and you executed

Pryde...Not realy feelsing writing about yourself for a story peice unless its some obviously ficticious out of body type peice. This was more flexing I guess?. Not bad content at all but I dont think it fits the requirments.

V/Cake

08-07-2013, 09:22 PM	#10
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648788	On phone sorry Cake... definitely felt the imagery here. You took an interesting route. I could actually picture myself on a boardwalk tho lke jersey shore. Good story bro. Details are key imo and you executed Pryde...Not realy feelsing writing about yourself for a story peice unless its some obviously ficticious out of body type peice. This was more flexing I guess?. Not bad content at all but I dont think it fits the requirments. V/Cake