Round 2: PancakeBrah vs. Pryde {PancakeBrah wins}

Pinot Grij · 08-07-2013, 06:46 PM

Pancake's style is unmatched here. The way he takes simples characters and fills them up with details slowly.. hits me every time. Loved this character and the details put in to make him so much more than the words even express. The ending was perfect - so solid.

Pryde... you wrote a story about yourself. It's all good man, just came off a bit too much like typical rap bravado. Didnt' connect with me in a storytelling sense, but you have nice scheme capabilities.

Vote for Pancake

08-07-2013, 06:46 PM	#9
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Pancake's style is unmatched here. The way he takes simples characters and fills them up with details slowly.. hits me every time. Loved this character and the details put in to make him so much more than the words even express. The ending was perfect - so solid. Pryde... you wrote a story about yourself. It's all good man, just came off a bit too much like typical rap bravado. Didnt' connect with me in a storytelling sense, but you have nice scheme capabilities. Vote for Pancake