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Nokyo Genosyde
Join Date: Aug 2013
Location: South Side
Posts: 14
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This composition spoke volumes to me. Because of my shitty phone, I cant get too in depth with my review, But I must say that the beginning -
'I write to you today my friends To say I feel I'm at the end. Do not cry at my demise, I accept my fate, I will not hide.' Had me hooked from jumpstreet, lol. The other part that had me hooked was- 'Now I claim just two children of my own, my beautiful daughter and son. I was baptized a Christian under water (and rum too) I learned to beat my inner demons without help (from sun tzu) standing at the precipice and spitting off the edge of it, ignoring all the negatives till I blamed myself for negligence.' I really relate to this so, this had me stukk. A great verse overall, I think. Keep it up.... |
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