(God Of War ft. Geno) An Artist Zone.

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

daamn, C come in on some other shiiit

pagan lies in each steeple of a vagrants mind-weak people
looked at the ancient times through satans eyes-i see evil
tho i seem feeble, i'm hardened stone, sit upon discarded thrones
where art is shown, in the form of tags or garden gnomes

^ aint peeped nothing you've wrote for a minute now, ^ & that aint usual to how i see you do - but tha shit coming off nice yo on some lyrical shit lmfao...cept tha garden gnomes, iunno how thats relevant, i mean maybe i missed something, buh in tha case i didnt - i feel that shit doesnt need to be there, & kinda fucked up tha mood/imagery i was getting up until that point.
flow wise - i dislike even mentioning this shit when its a written verse (prolly cause niggas tend to see multiz & think the flows nuts) buh your shits always come off butter to me, so thats that...

cough up retarded jokes and clown the useless stuck in our shells
diss the sheep, until we realize were only making fun of ourselves
conscience tuggin our belts, in love with help, no independence
so inconsistent, there'll be no ups n downs if i end tha sentence

& them four lines are just...tough, the meaning behind the first two in particular...man i liked that shit.

G.know you know what it is with me, to me tha highest respect you can give a nigga is tha truth...& i didnt like your shit at all, i wont used to word forced cause of all the connotations attached to it, but i will use the word contrivance...& i mean it with a difference

Been meditating privately, silently
These lambs know not to speek when I'm climbing chi

^ just seems uninspired, like from the get go i just get the vibe you just drilling out another verse on auto-pilot. ^ i mean just the wording alone, i read the shit out loud, just doesnt seem pure/authentic wdeva you wanna call it. - eh, that's just the vibe i get off it atleast. plus i think i really dont like tha climbing chi, just not a word i think fits alongside with chi. wdeva though, niggaz breaking down two lines like that all you wrote lol
being real though, what ive said about them two lines can carry over to my overall feel of your verse to be honest...

Blood drips down when I paint the canvas, its a dirtier style
You ain't heard in a while, just have to turn my own personal dials
Versatile, wild, or maybe just cool calm collected nd deep

^ minus that, which just emits that rawness which i cant help but fuck with,
but again after that, that aint slept in a week shit, threw in deadliest fiend like iunno why...i mean really i dont even feel like i need to elaborate cause i got the feeling you know the deal. iunno, as always could be tha mood im in, your verse just comes off like you didnt wanna write it, & in a similar vein i aint wanna read it...i wasnt mad at the closer though just on some throw away shit.

on the whole, yeah C you got off, & G.know you didnt. ive already stated what the fux i think. I aint mad for a second at the two different approaches, the whole artist shit is relative to the self, so it aint about having two niggas tryna rock with the same steez, i actually think the two do...& would compliment each other if done correct.

wdeva wdeva, no disrespect intended, but take it howeva you feel it was meant

#1 stay up both you niggaz