(Oats & Geno) ..And the World Keeps Spinning.

YDK · 08-03-2013, 11:26 PM

Got damn this was nice fellas I wish I coulda got on this wit ya I def feel where y'all comin from I been workin 7 ta 7 tryna get money for my soon ta be born daughter so this shit hit me hard. A ton of emotion and you both kept the flow hot an the dialogue was a nice touch. Both pointed out real shit an the way it ended with the poverty's here to stay line really put the exclamation point on the whole piece. Real nice job guys hit me up next time lol

08-03-2013, 11:26 PM	#2
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	Got damn this was nice fellas I wish I coulda got on this wit ya I def feel where y'all comin from I been workin 7 ta 7 tryna get money for my soon ta be born daughter so this shit hit me hard. A ton of emotion and you both kept the flow hot an the dialogue was a nice touch. Both pointed out real shit an the way it ended with the poverty's here to stay line really put the exclamation point on the whole piece. Real nice job guys hit me up next time lol __________________