Week 2 - Storyteller vs PancakeBrah - PANCAKEBRAH WINS

[Mike Wrecka]

this battle was a good one. two very different verses up against each other here.

pancake - enjoyed this verse. went super short bar but it worked wonderfully because you kept rhymes going for a while so it just read in a really impressive way. very descriptive. for the second week in a row you described something using somewhat abstract phrases while still painting a very vivid image. I like your style mos definitely. the sword covered with innards line really struck me as cool. it when you stopped describing the womans physical features and started speaking about the past of her heritage.

storyteller- I was really impressed with this verse. I liked everything about it. taking the form of real life poet and Icelandic historian of sorts to deliver your verse was a really cool concept. you brought informational facts while still making it flow and not feel boring. which is very difficult to do. I actually found myself getting really into your verse as history is extremely interesting to me and whether it was accurate or not, I don't know, the verse captured my attention quite well. the flow and vocab weren't as good as your opponents, but they were both very good.


overall- we have cakes verse which was a beautiful and descriptive piece full of vivid imagery and a complex rhyme structure. it was short though. which it seemed like it ended when it should have, so its not his fault but it did end quite quickly. storyteller had a verse that was historically driven and still flowed well. I really enjoyed both verse. thanks for the reads but I enjoyed storys slightly more

vote- story