Does This Verse Make Sense?

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by Split Eight

I'm saying we should change that because it is stupid

I never meant "using punchlines" but if you just talk about how your eternal soul rides the Fantastic 4's Infinity Toaster across oaken Satan mandibles then its dumb and it would be cooler if you made it more directed

yeah but im just saying in general like its hard to vote on something when everyone has a different meaning u know? like how to even write it lol

if im going to have a swag n flow verse and half the people i talk to think its spose to be this way but the other half think its posed to be that way then wtf do i actually write

the shit just gets confusing for writers/voters alike