Week 2 - Rawn M.D. vs Certain Serpent -RAWN M.D.

[Pinot Grij]

I give this one to Certain Serpent.

I felt story-wise there was more there that moved me. Rawn's story progressed but didn't capture any emotional depth - it was stoic and stern, like a Mennonite... but Serpent went deeper... took the topic to a relatable angle and worked swiftly between characters... nice turns of phrase in there as well

We watched Journey and Kiss.
We took journeys and kissed

That's nicely done. Shit like that hits well.

Rawn had a nice piece, but Serpent brought raw emotion that won me over.