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07-31-2013, 01:42 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 27
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Dope-
instead of whats expected in a text battle you rappedapho like you were in a real life battle freestyling. You had some decent concepts but the punches werent really hitting. Try throwing in wordplay, metophors, punchlinesm double entendres, name flips, etc.... Boredom- decent concepts and the punches hitting well. Some tight nameflips and an overall solid vesre. v/Boredom
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White is Tight fyi. my other name's white Therefor white is tight |
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