The Lighter Side of Darkness

Spoken · 07-30-2013, 04:03 AM

The intricate wording was someone interesting but the content at times built to be nice fell short. The story and diction you had set in mind was great but then it comes to play with the rhyme and the whole set of it was up and down. Some minor grammatical errors but nothing daunting tbh.... The content though made a drastic depth with the emotion set in stone. A great read none the less thy I can appreciate!!!

07-30-2013, 04:03 AM	#2
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	The intricate wording was someone interesting but the content at times built to be nice fell short. The story and diction you had set in mind was great but then it comes to play with the rhyme and the whole set of it was up and down. Some minor grammatical errors but nothing daunting tbh.... The content though made a drastic depth with the emotion set in stone. A great read none the less thy I can appreciate!!! __________________ WP Po'ethics