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07-28-2013, 01:37 AM
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ghost in the matrix
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I def gotta say man you impress me more with each piece I read from you. I really like the subtle flow with this and the directional concept. I took it as the different paths and directions a man takes in life play out in the end, if he hadn't done or gone a certain way he might no of been a husband or father or even dead. A beautiful peace honestly and I really didn't see any negatives. Very nice bruh keep dropping
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