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Old 07-27-2013, 11:24 AM   #1
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when people harness their skill, theres no obstacle that they cant overtake,
but you have nothing to harness, like Bags being stood up on his indoor rock climbing date/
competition here was weak for awhile, and sik was the main benefactor,
now he wishes he can battle in the past, like civil war re-enactors /
it took over a month for you to accept this battle, acting like an average joe instead,
sik dodged, ducked, dipped, dived, dodged, every single call out thread/
this nerd writes lines about shooting guns as if he's a repeat offender,
but I guarantee the only clip on his waist, is attached to his suspenders/
if we were in the same room, this timid lame would blend into the background of the place,
while id make an impression...... of my fist in his face/
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Old 07-30-2013, 06:30 PM   #2
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when people harness their skill, theres no obstacle that they cant overtake,
but you have nothing to harness, like Bags being stood up on his indoor rock climbing date/
This was okay. The concept was there to be better, and it really didn't attack SiK. Ok opener.
competition here was weak for awhile, and sik was the main benefactor,
now he wishes he can battle in the past, like civil war re-enactors /
ehhh...the concept/metaphor was on point. I liked it, but it missed as a punch. SiK's BEEN active for awhile, long as I've been here. Nice wordplay but only an okay punch.
it took over a month for you to accept this battle, acting like an average joe instead,
sik dodged, ducked, dipped, dived, dodged, every single call out thread/
Uh, no. Not sure of the thought process for this one.
this nerd writes lines about shooting guns as if he's a repeat offender,
but I guarantee the only clip on his waist, is attached to his suspenders/
I had a 7 year hiatus from text and still know clip lines are played. They have to be much more clever than this.
if we were in the same room, this timid lame would blend into the background of the place,
while id make an impression...... of my fist in his face/
Bad closer. Very statement-ish in terms of the punch. Would had to have been worded much better to work effectively.
I haven't seen you battle much, but I liked your Elements battle verse much more. That particular verse had the same problem as this one (statement-ish) but on a lesser level. Your first two bars were creative and I liked their potential but they were soft in terms of landing a punch. After that the verse lacked the creativity I look for in a battle verse. I think you have the potential but it wasn't realized in this verse.

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Ya punches are poor, n ironically ya fuckin broke
If Wreck n ball in the same sentence, S’cause ya verses look like the aftermath of one of THOSE
Pretty good. Solid opener.
Your 1-2 punch reign was a joke, now I just want you dead
But the way Cash killed this faggot, you’d think there was already a bounty on his fuckin head
Cash/Cashius lines are so easy to write that they're constantly invading other verse. Not a particularly great flip on it either. Nah.
I’ve fucked mad cougars, so THAT thread was such a bore
Mike getting a piece of any pussy is harder to picture than DG EVER being fucked before
Statement-ish. The cougar/pussy connection made it slightly better but still not great.
I'm predicted to win, especially when all my punches landing
So we know even if Rectify the odds, it would still be considered a huge misunderstanding
Dope wordplay, worked both ways. The most creative bar of either verse.
I got this shit locked, an easy win cause this g’s fake
So go ahead and tell his ass goodbuy like illnika scoring Jordans off of ebay
Came off as a little cheesy, but solid.
Not SiK's best, but he was attempting at concepts and flips every line except the DG punch. Some of them hit, some of them didn't. Shit happens.

SiK was more consistently creative and more direct. I could feel more went into his verse. This was an okay battler, I've seen both drop better.

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