Round 1: Veritas vs. Otpeks {Veritas wins}

God Of War · 07-18-2013, 05:36 PM

The Regular Battle

Thisround is a regular battle and will start off the elements tourney

you know the rules to battling/topicals/ssnf we shouldnt have to explain them to you

lines min-10
line max-16

VERSES ARE DUE THURSDAY THE 25TH

goodluck to both participants

Otpeks · 07-20-2013, 07:05 PM

10?

veritas · 07-22-2013, 05:45 PM

thats fine. I got mine. you got yours?

veritas · 07-24-2013, 01:44 PM

die.

Bitch get your weight up, I rape your soul until it’s broken so:
bet this nine will fuck your face up and nigga no-Tonio.

You’re no threat cuz your bars empty; it’s always sunny in Philadelphia.
My blade crosses your face twice, that’s quality, motherfucking X-celsior

Professor X swag, I can violate your mind without even having to stand up,
My sword sticks him up, cuz when I stab him, he SHRIVELS as he’s RAISIN his hands up

Peks aint ill with words or a legend, trust that I see through a bitch like a sonogram,
V a Professional assassin, SO u won’t see murder like Master P’s brother was hollow man

Lui-He-Ba-Fa liquid fists pummel your chest, call me IP man, I collapse this B’s lungs
Pecs lost, Cuz Everyone knows that dope gets flushed whenever the heat comes

Bitch.

Otpeks · 07-25-2013, 11:44 PM

Saw that discussion thread where you were begging for mod votes
cuz you cant write to destroy a verse probably still couldnt do it in g0d mode
your dreams of fashion designer are so close your almost touchin it atleast
this faggot wants to edit threads so bad hes practically bustin at the seams
the fact that you were even put up against me is an oddity
ive studied the periodic table and veritas is not found to have elemental qualities
did you join this tourney to test your metal??are you for real bro
ive been mining thru all the dirt you drop and havent found any priceless material
bags is gonna write for you?? ofcourse a win for you is more then vital
but the statistics show you'll either no show or choke before the final

...........

PancakeBrah · 07-26-2013, 11:49 AM

Veritas was a little corny. Some played concepts. Weird structure. See murder was his best but wasn't great. Whereas otpeks verse was like newbie battle rap by numbers. Weak punches, lame wording. At least v had his weird online persona for a little personality.

V/ veritas

God Of War · 07-28-2013, 01:16 AM

upppp

Objective · 07-28-2013, 11:26 AM

Veritas: Some weird lines there, interesting and creative enough to keep the enjoyability up. Thought it was cool enough overall.

Otpeks: Kinda basic ish, straight forward kinda forgettable stuff for a verse. Keep writing and read some of the better peoples verses for inspiration and to see the difference between great and not so great, might help ya improve.

Vote: Veritas.

Geno · 07-28-2013, 12:37 PM

This is an awkward battle.

Veritas was definitely corny with the raisin shrivel bar lmao @ that. Thing about v is I know he has a lot of creative ability. I crave more from you in battle though.
The master p brother line was very reminiscent of a line I heard from vinnie paz. Totally different type of flip but it reminded me of the line. Vinny: ill make u see murder like master p's brother

Otpeks was very played to tbh
I feel like he came out better, but very slightly tho. V could have taken this imo if he had just came a touch more original. Had a more "hardcore" verse. But as far as punches and hits I got otpeks here. Tough battle to call, could go either way here honestly.

V-otpeks

Spoken · 07-29-2013, 06:07 PM

I got skepto with the \/...

Veritas was cool and I felt if he just worked the wording a little better that raisin bar could have been more than what it was. The lung collapse was nice tho but the professor X bar was an ehh... The hollow man was a nice flip.

Skepto- the edit threads bar was lulz for reals the miner punch was nice and the periodic table was eh... The bags write for you bar was a nice personal But I felt all three bar connected very strong where as veritas had 2 strong bars and a eh... In there

Hush · 07-30-2013, 09:35 AM

I vote otp

veritas · 07-30-2013, 12:56 PM

Aint counting huth.

SiK · 07-30-2013, 02:27 PM

The only thing I can base this off of is concepts....Both came pretty weak in the punch department and with the wording. The thing that stood out to me was Otpeks simplicity, it read smoothly but it seemed overly weak, while they both didn't really land hits Veritas had some complexity and thought to his lines.

V/Veritas

07-18-2013, 05:36 PM	#1
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,822 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493983	Round 1: Veritas vs. Otpeks {Veritas wins} The Regular Battle Thisround is a regular battle and will start off the elements tourney you know the rules to battling/topicals/ssnf we shouldnt have to explain them to you lines min-10 line max-16 VERSES ARE DUE THURSDAY THE 25TH goodluck to both participants

07-20-2013, 07:05 PM	#2
Otpeks LandLord Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 52 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 38	10? __________________ The LandLords

07-24-2013, 01:44 PM	#4
veritas HALL OF FAME Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: portal 7 to the 9th exponent Posts: 16,160 Battle Record: 3-5 Rep Power: 0	die. Bitch get your weight up, I rape your soul until it’s broken so: bet this nine will fuck your face up and nigga no-Tonio. You’re no threat cuz your bars empty; it’s always sunny in Philadelphia. My blade crosses your face twice, that’s quality, motherfucking X-celsior Professor X swag, I can violate your mind without even having to stand up, My sword sticks him up, cuz when I stab him, he SHRIVELS as he’s RAISIN his hands up Peks aint ill with words or a legend, trust that I see through a bitch like a sonogram, V a Professional assassin, SO u won’t see murder like Master P’s brother was hollow man Lui-He-Ba-Fa liquid fists pummel your chest, call me IP man, I collapse this B’s lungs Pecs lost, Cuz Everyone knows that dope gets flushed whenever the heat comes Bitch. Last edited by veritas; 07-24-2013 at 04:35 PM.

07-25-2013, 11:44 PM	#5
Otpeks LandLord Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 52 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 38	Saw that discussion thread where you were begging for mod votes cuz you cant write to destroy a verse probably still couldnt do it in g0d mode your dreams of fashion designer are so close your almost touchin it atleast this faggot wants to edit threads so bad hes practically bustin at the seams the fact that you were even put up against me is an oddity ive studied the periodic table and veritas is not found to have elemental qualities did you join this tourney to test your metal??are you for real bro ive been mining thru all the dirt you drop and havent found any priceless material bags is gonna write for you?? ofcourse a win for you is more then vital but the statistics show you'll either no show or choke before the final ........... __________________ The LandLords

07-28-2013, 11:26 AM	#8
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Veritas: Some weird lines there, interesting and creative enough to keep the enjoyability up. Thought it was cool enough overall. Otpeks: Kinda basic ish, straight forward kinda forgettable stuff for a verse. Keep writing and read some of the better peoples verses for inspiration and to see the difference between great and not so great, might help ya improve. Vote: Veritas. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

07-26-2013, 11:49 AM	#6
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Veritas was a little corny. Some played concepts. Weird structure. See murder was his best but wasn't great. Whereas otpeks verse was like newbie battle rap by numbers. Weak punches, lame wording. At least v had his weird online persona for a little personality. V/ veritas

07-28-2013, 01:16 AM	#7
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,822 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493983	upppp

07-28-2013, 12:37 PM	#9
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	This is an awkward battle. Veritas was definitely corny with the raisin shrivel bar lmao @ that. Thing about v is I know he has a lot of creative ability. I crave more from you in battle though. The master p brother line was very reminiscent of a line I heard from vinnie paz. Totally different type of flip but it reminded me of the line. Vinny: ill make u see murder like master p's brother Otpeks was very played to tbh I feel like he came out better, but very slightly tho. V could have taken this imo if he had just came a touch more original. Had a more "hardcore" verse. But as far as punches and hits I got otpeks here. Tough battle to call, could go either way here honestly. V-otpeks __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

07-29-2013, 06:07 PM	#10
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	I got skepto with the \/... Veritas was cool and I felt if he just worked the wording a little better that raisin bar could have been more than what it was. The lung collapse was nice tho but the professor X bar was an ehh... The hollow man was a nice flip. Skepto- the edit threads bar was lulz for reals the miner punch was nice and the periodic table was eh... The bags write for you bar was a nice personal But I felt all three bar connected very strong where as veritas had 2 strong bars and a eh... In there __________________ WP Po'ethics

07-30-2013, 09:35 AM	#11
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	I vote otp __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

07-30-2013, 02:27 PM	#13
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648788	The only thing I can base this off of is concepts....Both came pretty weak in the punch department and with the wording. The thing that stood out to me was Otpeks simplicity, it read smoothly but it seemed overly weak, while they both didn't really land hits Veritas had some complexity and thought to his lines. V/Veritas