"Bombs over Volgograd"

[Darth Yoda]

i admit I usually skim through your pieces recently vulgar, but I gave this one a try. it isn't becuz i disrespect you or don't hold your writing to high regard, but it's because some days I don't feel like reading, and although I know it's great I just don't sometimes. Even with myself. Sometimes I don't even know what I write. I don't even care, nor do I revise it or spend time on a lot of things. Maybe that's just a phase, but I read this, believe that. Very good. interesting to read this previous commenters thoughts, and my own, intermingling.


papal crayons? you're obscurely witty mister vulgar. I see what you do. and it gets my blood boiling. haven't been motivated as of late. I need to read and engulf good writing. To release the sleeping behemoth.

I'm sorry if I'm talking about myself, this is about you and your writing, sir.

Opening up my eyes, I clearly see what you did here. Although I do enjoy your writing, I'd love to see a stream of consciousness, rather than a formatted style, just for once. Just to sate my thirst and curiosity. The "here's sally" was absolutely superb, and reminded me of something I'd say. but of course you have more discipline, and finish it with a series of thoughtful storytelling, weaving in and out! Love some of your odd rhymes!! !keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!









keep doin u'