A Deadman's Spitz- SCAR'S RECLUSE

Vulgar · 07-21-2013, 10:01 PM

lol yawl fellas had fun with this one.

Y'all softer than pillow foam, I soul flow sketch with the lead
extract beautiful memories from homeless wretches I've fed
black hole journey, honestly didn't stretch to my death
but time travelled - the colors added a edge to my breath
^Wasn't feeling the opening sequence much because it wreaked of braggatrollio, but this part was s!ck.

Black, you went the fluck in with this rhyme scheme:

a mutant, mutilant, gross - grotesque, illusory notes
used to indulge my psyche using beautiful quotes
wrote em down. computers broke when i tried viewing the post
^yeah

In light of the recent Albus Dumbledore failias, this was like a Bertie Botts Every Flavor Bean special edition: sorcerer's rendition of the braggadocio clinic. Both got your hits in. Nobody hit the canvas. Lyrics were had. Seats were filled.

Keeps were doing you's

07-21-2013, 10:01 PM	#1
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	lol yawl fellas had fun with this one. Y'all softer than pillow foam, I soul flow sketch with the lead extract beautiful memories from homeless wretches I've fed black hole journey, honestly didn't stretch to my death but time travelled - the colors added a edge to my breath ^Wasn't feeling the opening sequence much because it wreaked of braggatrollio, but this part was s!ck. Black, you went the fluck in with this rhyme scheme: a mutant, mutilant, gross - grotesque, illusory notes used to indulge my psyche using beautiful quotes wrote em down. computers broke when i tried viewing the post ^yeah In light of the recent Albus Dumbledore failias, this was like a Bertie Botts Every Flavor Bean special edition: sorcerer's rendition of the braggadocio clinic. Both got your hits in. Nobody hit the canvas. Lyrics were had. Seats were filled. Keeps were doing you's