Xnub vs. Flo Real - XNUB WINS 5-3

Xnub · 07-16-2013, 04:15 PM

@Flo Real

16 lines, due tomorrow. I haven't had a computer and I didn't just want to key from my phone. I know you already got ya verse for me, so check if ur down.

Flow · 07-17-2013, 06:25 AM

Slow down there buddy - I never agreed to 16. you having a laugh, an just so your aware I don't have nout wrote an ready.

I don't mind writing something for today but 12 is my limit....

Let me know ill start writing...

@Xnub

Xnub · 07-17-2013, 01:01 PM

12 it is then... I'll be dropping in an hour or 2, consider this a green light faggot.

Xnub · 07-19-2013, 03:15 PM

yo..

Everything you write is wack, and i'm inklined to make the facts hurt...
cus w/ a Penny never shine, and that's what all this faggots raps worth.
plus ya whole crew is pussy bitches and not one of you fem's great...
so its hard to believe this faggot can Flo Real, cus not one of his Menstrate.
Flabby fuck need his pussy on a payroll... dudes too cheap to have a sex life.
the only time you coming out of pocket, pussy... is when u cop the new Flesh- Light..
This dope heads illiterate, teachers never thought ya ass would make it
No wonder u think getting Highs cool, and ironically never graduated.
I hear u work in Real Estate, now that's something I'd respect kid...
but if you ever Sherlock Holmes..? You'd just be playing a Detective..
Your not an approved voter, guy... but too bad it's not based on talent.
Cause if that was the case...? I'd guarantee flo would never make the ballot.

Bet you don't show... @Flo Real

Flow · 07-19-2013, 04:01 PM

@Xnub fuck you

Aiyyo,

X got nubs for hands so how in the hell is he typing this
When X has as much grasp on solid bars as fucking unicyclists
Your supernatural, I never seen summin so unwanted by chicks son
bitches be like, is it an ex or cist, either way there going to need one
Your a lil faggot and every girlfriend you said you had is pretend
Ironically x is the prefix to everyone of those supposed girlfriends
you thinking you had a chance wit me, bitch this is your final fantasy
cus your concepts are as overplayed as every instalment of that rpg
You got no tricks, you try but you got no chance of ever picking up a bitch
Cus unfortunately, on a day to day basis a bitch sees a total failure and ExIt!
So don't be Bleak when your facing someone better
Even if we want you to make like he did in that situation an leave forever

I never no show pussy

Xnub · 07-20-2013, 08:53 PM

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8991
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8907

PancakeBrah · 07-23-2013, 11:14 AM

V/ xnub.

Xnubs first two lines were good. His delivery and wording got really similar though. Compound word double entrendres. Every line. But still he had some funny bars. Nothing from flo real stood out to me. Ex or cist had potential as a concept but landed flat. Other than that it was all pretty bland.

Dope · 07-23-2013, 02:35 PM

Xnub your first four bars had me wanting more felt you forced some concepts could of had a stronger finish.. like the flow tho

Flo Real your opener was on point had steadily punches thru outfelt you lost it with the last bars

V/Flo overall just came harder thru out

God Of War · 07-23-2013, 06:36 PM

fl some of ur concepts are worded bad enough to not make sense bro u got to work on ur wording and ur concepts

xnub ur concepts is cool they feel heavily worded to me tho but u got this pretty well

v/xnub

King Karaoke · 07-23-2013, 11:54 PM

Hi...

First guy was trash...
Had poor wording, weak concepts and played shit...
Nothing fresh...

you thinking you had a chance wit me, bitch this is your final fantasy
cus your concepts are as overplayed as every instalment of that rpg

This was cool from Flo...
I think you just need to think out your concepts more...
You had the concepts but you just executed them poorly...

vote- Flo...

Bye...

Nev · 07-24-2013, 03:38 PM

Better wordplay on flo real
Also xnub's punches just werent connecting as well
Flo real's landed better and more creativity on his side

V/ Flo Real

07-24-2013, 06:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Xnub

yo..

Everything you write is wack, and i'm inklined to make the facts hurt...
cus w/ a Penny never shine, and that's what all this faggots raps worth.
--good
plus ya whole crew is pussy bitches and not one of you fem's great...
so its hard to believe this faggot can Flo Real, cus not one of his Menstrate.
--played wp, cool flip
Flabby fuck need his pussy on a payroll... dudes too cheap to have a sex life.
the only time you coming out of pocket, pussy... is when u cop the new Flesh- Light..
--overuse of the word pussy, really hurt this. Decent connection poor wording
This dope heads illiterate, teachers never thought ya ass would make it
No wonder u think getting Highs cool, and ironically never graduated.
--played. Ur getting to the point in ur career where u think of all the word plays that have been done lol
I hear u work in Real Estate, now that's something I'd respect kid...
but if you ever Sherlock Holmes..? You'd just be playing a Detective..
--sure lock homes/Sherlock Holmes? Wordplay is forced with Holmes/homes and I don't even see te connection
Your not an approved voter, guy... but too bad it's not based on talent.
Cause if that was the case...? I'd guarantee flo would never make the ballot.
-fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillet

Bet you don't show... @Flo Real

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flo Real

@Xnub fuck you

Aiyyo,

X got nubs for hands so how in the hell is he typing this
When X has as much grasp on solid bars as fucking unicyclists
--corny
Your supernatural, I never seen summin so unwanted by chicks son
bitches be like, is it an ex or cist, either way there going to need one
--wp is fine, but the connection is forced as shit man
Your a lil faggot and every girlfriend you said you had is pretend
Ironically x is the prefix to everyone of those supposed girlfriends
--how would he have exes if they were imaginary to begin with?
you thinking you had a chance wit me, bitch this is your final fantasy
cus your concepts are as overplayed as every instalment of that rpg
--okish sort of
You got no tricks, you try but you got no chance of ever picking up a bitch
Cus unfortunately, on a day to day basis a bitch sees a total failure and ExIt!
--good with better wording
So don't be Bleak when your facing someone better
Even if we want you to make like he did in that situation an leave forever
--fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfi llerfiller

I never no show pussy

V/ Xnub

Better concepts and wording and execution etc

CymbiCort · 07-25-2013, 03:57 PM

V/ via phone

Xsnub took it with a more polished verse. His wording was better and execution of concepts stronger. Some of his best punches were menstrate n sherlock homes.But flow had me laughin with a couple his,like the unicyclist and final fantasy. Flow had the better concepts but that doesnt win battles,execution does. Close battle though.

V/xnub

Flow · 07-25-2013, 04:30 PM

4-3 x

...the Nagger · 07-27-2013, 01:10 PM

@karoake stay corny son

Talmbout played lines then quoting a final fantasy wp

Vote xnub

Both y'all started off strong then fell off

Xnub had the best out of the worst to me

07-16-2013, 04:15 PM	#1
Xnub SZNUBBED Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 286 Battle Record: 5-13 Rep Power: 34	Xnub vs. Flo Real - XNUB WINS 5-3 @Flo Real 16 lines, due tomorrow. I haven't had a computer and I didn't just want to key from my phone. I know you already got ya verse for me, so check if ur down. Last edited by Xnub; 07-16-2013 at 04:18 PM.

07-19-2013, 03:15 PM	#4
Xnub SZNUBBED Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 286 Battle Record: 5-13 Rep Power: 34	yo.. Everything you write is wack, and i'm inklined to make the facts hurt... cus w/ a Penny never shine, and that's what all this faggots raps worth. plus ya whole crew is pussy bitches and not one of you fem's great... so its hard to believe this faggot can Flo Real, cus not one of his Menstrate. Flabby fuck need his pussy on a payroll... dudes too cheap to have a sex life. the only time you coming out of pocket, pussy... is when u cop the new Flesh- Light.. This dope heads illiterate, teachers never thought ya ass would make it No wonder u think getting Highs cool, and ironically never graduated. I hear u work in Real Estate, now that's something I'd respect kid... but if you ever Sherlock Holmes..? You'd just be playing a Detective.. Your not an approved voter, guy... but too bad it's not based on talent. Cause if that was the case...? I'd guarantee flo would never make the ballot. Bet you don't show... @Flo Real Last edited by Xnub; 07-19-2013 at 03:26 PM.

07-23-2013, 02:35 PM	#8
Dope blueprint to success Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Raleigh, NC Posts: 85 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 34	Xnub your first four bars had me wanting more felt you forced some concepts could of had a stronger finish.. like the flow tho Flo Real your opener was on point had steadily punches thru outfelt you lost it with the last bars V/Flo overall just came harder thru out __________________ I shine.. diamond in the light... they fold under pressure

07-23-2013, 11:54 PM	#10
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353694	Hi... First guy was trash... Had poor wording, weak concepts and played shit... Nothing fresh... you thinking you had a chance wit me, bitch this is your final fantasy cus your concepts are as overplayed as every instalment of that rpg This was cool from Flo... I think you just need to think out your concepts more... You had the concepts but you just executed them poorly... vote- Flo... Bye... __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke

07-17-2013, 01:01 PM	#3
Xnub SZNUBBED Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 286 Battle Record: 5-13 Rep Power: 34	12 it is then... I'll be dropping in an hour or 2, consider this a green light faggot.

07-20-2013, 08:53 PM	#6
Xnub SZNUBBED Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 286 Battle Record: 5-13 Rep Power: 34	http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8991 http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8907

07-23-2013, 11:14 AM	#7
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	V/ xnub. Xnubs first two lines were good. His delivery and wording got really similar though. Compound word double entrendres. Every line. But still he had some funny bars. Nothing from flo real stood out to me. Ex or cist had potential as a concept but landed flat. Other than that it was all pretty bland.

07-23-2013, 06:36 PM	#9
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,825 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493980	fl some of ur concepts are worded bad enough to not make sense bro u got to work on ur wording and ur concepts xnub ur concepts is cool they feel heavily worded to me tho but u got this pretty well v/xnub

07-24-2013, 03:38 PM	#11
Nev Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 13 Battle Record: 1-0 Rep Power: 34	Better wordplay on flo real Also xnub's punches just werent connecting as well Flo real's landed better and more creativity on his side V/ Flo Real

07-25-2013, 03:57 PM	#13
CymbiCort Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 184 Battle Record: 4-13 Rep Power: 34	V/ via phone Xsnub took it with a more polished verse. His wording was better and execution of concepts stronger. Some of his best punches were menstrate n sherlock homes.But flow had me laughin with a couple his,like the unicyclist and final fantasy. Flow had the better concepts but that doesnt win battles,execution does. Close battle though. V/xnub

07-27-2013, 01:10 PM	#15
...the Nagger Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 2,862 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 15781384	@karoake stay corny son Talmbout played lines then quoting a final fantasy wp Vote xnub Both y'all started off strong then fell off Xnub had the best out of the worst to me