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 The oceanographer stepped to the light, and felt an awkward sense of surprise. A tingling cold. But didn't register why the colors and palleted blends had turned so unnatural upon the ballast's descent. A light chiascurro, gradual on the canvassed conception, was badly distended for what the mammoth was destined. A mammalian museum piece. Gallant. Promethean deity. Callous, seething, she cursed the being she met in the depths of the Barrier Reef. Marie Therese could barely believe the shape she had swam past. A grazing, old land mass, weathered and barnacled with better tomorrows ahead. And she would hold her hands back- when the aquamarine beams concocted an aura between her the God of the Seaweed. She, the reverent daughter. Heart impossibly beating. But now, all she could see was a fish out of water.
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01-30-2014, 11:49 AM
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up over Frank
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how often do you aesop rock?
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'Weathered in barnacles of better tomorrow' was beautifully said. Well done.
The museum of natural history is an impossible task but you've got yourself a niffty little exhibition show here critter. Send me some lyrics and we'll collaborate
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Gallant. Promethean deity.
Callous, seething, she cursed the being she met in the depths of the Barrier Reef. Marie Therese could barely believe the shape she had swam past. A grazing, old land mass, weathered and barnacled with better tomorrows You said whaaaat?? picaso on the canvas everybody! awesome piece. Classic Split.
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Lol @ Wayz Wizzy...and you owe me feed bitch, nah...this cool tho.Some shit read awkward to me but I'm drunk so what would I know.
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excuse you?
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