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Split 01-29-2014 12:30 AM

airfish
 
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The oceanographer stepped to the light,
and felt an awkward sense of surprise.
A tingling cold. But didn't register why
the colors and palleted blends had turned so
unnatural upon the ballast's descent.
A light chiascurro, gradual on the canvassed conception,
was badly distended for what the mammoth was destined.
A mammalian museum piece.
Gallant. Promethean deity.
Callous, seething, she cursed the being she
met in the depths of the Barrier Reef.
Marie Therese could barely believe
the shape she had swam past.
A grazing, old land mass, weathered
and barnacled with better tomorrows
ahead. And she would hold her hands back-
when the aquamarine beams concocted
an aura between her the God of the Seaweed.
She, the reverent daughter. Heart impossibly beating.
But now, all she could see was a fish out of water.

Split 01-30-2014 11:49 AM

up over Frank

Wise Wiggles 01-30-2014 01:42 PM

how often do you aesop rock?

Split 01-31-2014 01:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Whys Weighs (Post 264601)
how often do you aesop rock?

not often

Frank 01-31-2014 02:29 AM

'Weathered in barnacles of better tomorrow' was beautifully said. Well done.

The museum of natural history is an impossible task but you've got yourself a niffty little exhibition show here critter.

Send me some lyrics and we'll collaborate

Smooth 02-01-2014 09:47 AM

Gallant. Promethean deity.
Callous, seething, she cursed the being she
met in the depths of the Barrier Reef.
Marie Therese could barely believe
the shape she had swam past.
A grazing, old land mass, weathered
and barnacled with better tomorrows

You said whaaaat?? picaso on the canvas everybody!
awesome piece. Classic Split.

Exis 02-01-2014 09:55 AM

Lol @ Wayz Wizzy...and you owe me feed bitch, nah...this cool tho.Some shit read awkward to me but I'm drunk so what would I know.

Wise Wiggles 02-01-2014 03:26 PM

excuse you?

Exis 02-04-2014 07:25 AM

I'm excused...


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