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05-14-2018, 09:54 PM
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 "Little ting what's wrong? Is it your dad?" "Yeah... he's dead." "Then may I suggest ... be sad ..." And with every tear that she shed The monster that once hid under beds Grew bolder and larger ... its influence spread Until after a while its darkness consumed Her room like a tomb and ran loose in her head. ♪♪Daddy's dead/ Your dad is dead/ D. E. A. Da. D. D. D./ DEAD!♪♪ "Muhahaha ... ♡I suv u♡."
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05-15-2018, 12:23 PM
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Ok now in depressed. Um I just wanna hug the little girl
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05-15-2018, 08:38 PM
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Tragic.
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05-19-2018, 09:55 PM
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This was a bit better it was short but it was better in a way i dont know what do i know it was too short and there was no real story but at least it was kind of interesting... i would have written more pushed the envelope a bit but at least the writing was bit like inspiring....
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