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ACTIVATE SELF 05-14-2018 09:54 PM

New Friends
 
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"Little ting what's wrong?
Is it your dad?"

"Yeah...
he's dead."

"Then may I suggest ...
be sad ..."

And with every tear that she shed
The monster that once hid under beds
Grew bolder and larger ... its influence spread
Until after a while its darkness consumed
Her room like a tomb and ran loose in her head.

♪♪Daddy's dead/ Your dad is dead/ D. E. A. Da. D. D. D./ DEAD!♪♪


"Muhahaha ... ♡I suv u♡."

Current faggot 05-15-2018 12:23 PM

Ok now in depressed. Um I just wanna hug the little girl

ACTIVATE SELF 05-15-2018 08:38 PM

Tragic.

2tripple0 05-19-2018 09:55 PM

This was a bit better it was short but it was better in a way i dont know what do i know it was too short and there was no real story but at least it was kind of interesting... i would have written more pushed the envelope a bit but at least the writing was bit like inspiring....


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