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Neighbor · 09-19-2013, 04:18 PM

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Originally Posted by dead man

neigh your avatar is lolz. dude looks so different nowadays.

Feed? lol

@Zenland @Baron Mynd @Vulgar

Leave me your links

veritas · 09-19-2013, 05:14 PM

I think your particular multi rhyming bragadoccio style is top notch. you remind me of jedi mind tricks but better, if that makes sense?

Zen · 09-19-2013, 10:18 PM

I just got off work and am drunk but I will feed your piece. I read this the other day and remember it being fuckin dope. Definitely some top notch swag and flow shit here. I'll try and leave more constructive feed tomorrow when I'm sober but for now all I can say is dope shit man.

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18940

Baron Mynd · 09-20-2013, 04:43 AM

I slay martyrs - cave drawings depicted my blade slaughtering victims

Dope line, loved it, great syllable matching of the end rhymes to give it that feel of doubling-up. I always enjoy those. I noticed it with the Trayvon line too, it’s no fluke, you know what you’re doing.

The Bam Margera line made me laugh, Captain America line seemed re-done from an older one of yours about either his costume or his shield or something? I forget exactly. Dracula has no reflection, does he? Lol. That line seemed odd to me, but the follow up swagged it out. Brandon lee was dope too.

Keep that pen moving!

09-19-2013, 10:18 PM	#23
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I just got off work and am drunk but I will feed your piece. I read this the other day and remember it being fuckin dope. Definitely some top notch swag and flow shit here. I'll try and leave more constructive feed tomorrow when I'm sober but for now all I can say is dope shit man. http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18940 Last edited by Zen; 09-20-2013 at 08:48 AM.

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09-20-2013, 04:43 AM	#24
Baron Mynd PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 285 Rep Power: 0	I slay martyrs - cave drawings depicted my blade slaughtering victims Dope line, loved it, great syllable matching of the end rhymes to give it that feel of doubling-up. I always enjoy those. I noticed it with the Trayvon line too, it’s no fluke, you know what you’re doing. The Bam Margera line made me laugh, Captain America line seemed re-done from an older one of yours about either his costume or his shield or something? I forget exactly. Dracula has no reflection, does he? Lol. That line seemed odd to me, but the follow up swagged it out. Brandon lee was dope too. Keep that pen moving!