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Neighbor 09-16-2013 01:15 AM

Siberia
 
My coat of arms is the Evil Eye.. y'all woke the heart of a sleeping giant
Screechin tires & screamin sirens - get blown apart when I'm squeezing iron
Load the cartridge & leave you dyin w/ blows as hard as stone carvings on Easter Island
The Young Boss; fuck strong suited, I'm Tony Stark w/ Extremis virus
No code of honor.. I'm in lucrative dealings w/ Lucifer's legions
Me & Kubrick have mutual feelings; leave a crucifix bleeding blue from the ceiling
At your funeral wielding two dual Uzis, unleashin bullets through the usual proceedings
Shoot the roof 'til it's peeling & use it to shield me - let ya family go through w/ the healing
Praise God as ya witness.. my brain's gone from existence
I slay martyrs - cave drawings depicted my blade slaughtering victims
The grave robber, keep a tre in Jane Fonda condition
Only trade stocks when that gauge locked in position; straight marketing gimmicks
A chainsaw in the grips of Kane Hodder, I'm vicious as slave auctioning bidders
Neigh palming the heat -
So pay homage or get Trayvon'd if it's beef like Dave Thomas' kitchen
That hammer airin like Bam Margera.. it's massive hysteria
I'm Captain America, strapped for whatever on Planet Terror w/ no natural predators
Castin reflections like Dracula's presence; my casket's been buried for half a millennia
'Til I wake up in darkness, pull the stake out my heart & splash it w/ Everclear
Last Emperor.. highly respected, you tryna go line-for-line w/ the best?
When that cannon squeeze, it's Brandon Lee; y'all faggots can die for your set

Wise Wiggles 09-16-2013 01:18 AM

@namix

Edit: from praise god to Dave Thomas' kitchen was my fav section.

zygote 09-16-2013 09:40 AM

".. it's massive hysteria
I'm Captain America, strapped for whatever on Planet Terror w/ no natural predators
Castin reflections like Dracula's presence; my casket's been buried for half a millennia"

Enjoyed it a lot, this type of rhyming format and aggressive boasting/insulting is appealing. The rhyming phrases are innovative and creative, liked the wide range of references from marketing gimmicks to Easter Island. It was very enjoyable to read.

dull boy 09-16-2013 10:18 AM

Dope.

Geno 09-16-2013 07:12 PM

Smh. No collab vs yet?

Geno 09-16-2013 07:12 PM

This was illy btw

StarFaggot 09-16-2013 07:20 PM

The Young Boss; fuck strong suited, I'm Tony Stark w/ Extremis virus

I slay martyrs - cave drawings depicted my blade slaughtering victims
The grave robber, keep a tre in Jane Fonda condition

I'm Captain America, strapped for whatever on Planet Terror w/ no natural predators


Meeeeean... Definitely the best textcee at doing multis on horrocore and gun lines... Nice delivery

Neighbor 09-16-2013 09:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide (Post 153446)
Smh. No collab vs yet?

I threw this together in like 20 minutes w/ lines I had lying around

I wanna write some new shit specifically for our collab.. it'll murder

Leave links for me, guys

Wise Wiggles 09-16-2013 10:29 PM

you would literally murder detour. that's why he ducks you. he knows it.

NYCSPITZ 09-17-2013 01:03 AM

dope

lmao @ aero coming into om leaving horrible shallow feed and d/r his fellow punchline battlers...some things never change...wait tho OM pieces are wack b/c "where is the audio"...well aero text battling is wack b/c where is the audio? We all know you'd get ate on KOTD

Wise Wiggles 09-17-2013 01:05 AM

lol

CopyPat 09-17-2013 01:13 AM

haha so sick. def top 3 all time to ever read anything they post. if this is 20 mins thats fuckin redunk

too dope with the references, scheming like a beast.. i try to emulate that typa scheming for sure. too many quotables because of the sick name drops. hahaha sick sick sickness

what also makes u dope is that u blend the harder fuck u style with straight knowledge of cool shit and smartly used vocab/references. its not dumbed down at all, theres always something behind what ur saying as far as the punchline.. its not random shit.

Awesome!!

oh p.s. yeah im def down for a collab. we'll just shit all over what ppl know about scheming haha

Plot 09-17-2013 01:51 AM

That was mad Mal

StarFaggot 09-17-2013 02:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NYCSPITZ (Post 153752)
dope

lmao @ aero coming into om leaving horrible shallow feed and d/r his fellow punchline battlers...some things never change...wait tho OM pieces are wack b/c "where is the audio"...well aero text battling is wack b/c where is the audio? We all know you'd get ate on KOTD


lol whats good ma? You've got a problem with me? You mad cuz daddy hasn't been feeding your drops? Well send links to all your drops to my PM and I'll feed all of them within 10hrs of submittal.

NYCSPITZ 09-17-2013 12:23 PM

lol...

I'd rather not receive horrible feed from a 30 second look-over, thanks though

Dove Dozer 09-17-2013 12:43 PM

Damn. First piece ive read from you and wow. Mad dope.

I strive to write like this.

Thanks for the dope read. Can you feed my open mic? Im gettin slept on like crazy. I dont think i suck THAT bad.

Peep this

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=17462

Its about my perfect world.


Holler

Mr. J 09-17-2013 05:58 PM

The first section of this was straight flames
next you picked up with some sick visuals and metaphors
kept it moving with some strong ass rhyme schemes
then ended it with a nod to one of the great horror stories
slick shit all around, I enjoyed the guano

Zombie 09-18-2013 02:14 PM

so pay homage and get trayvoned. this has very unique rhythms to it. i like your word usage but i see a bit of skepticism in uniformity to yourself.

dead man 09-18-2013 04:39 PM

neigh your avatar is lolz. dude looks so different nowadays.

e11even 09-19-2013 04:46 AM

that was a beast. definitely worth the read and the awe. loved it.


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