Write Night II: [The Finals] NYCSPITZ vs Darth Yoda [NYCSPITZ WINS]

Darth Yoda · 07-18-2013, 09:27 PM

Hi. I don't exist right now, but if you leave your name & address on paper
My bones'll manifest as some form of corporeal reality later.
Caught in the whirlwind. Injection. This Nurofen isn't closure.
Out the start it's the Pearl Gates. Carrying worlds' weight on my shoulder
Unfurling the swirl grid. Cumbersome. I've been up-and-up. Sucks
The Grim Reapers dick squeeze. I'm his Number one crush.
Take it to a neurological setting. Post-Apoco. You couldn't conjure or guess these
It's a impossible. Jet streams. No plausible ending, like Osama in Red Sea.
Feels like A wallop of confetti, swallows your head clean.
Comparable. Each and every one of these follicles sweating
And all you want is your current state atoned. Undermined delivered.
Blurred, your time is hindered. When you're crushed. Innately fold
The perfect time for shivers. Hey I heard your body escaped it's soul
Mercy. I've tried to figure, why I'm hurt. Disgraced out cold.
Cause your silver lining serpent, Isn't worth it's weight in gold

sorry for taking long and not meeting the 20 lines I got sidetracked with a few things. Hope this is enough!

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07-18-2013, 09:27 PM	#1
Darth Yoda Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 408 Battle Record: 6-2 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF Rep Power: 20182439	Hi. I don't exist right now, but if you leave your name & address on paper My bones'll manifest as some form of corporeal reality later. Caught in the whirlwind. Injection. This Nurofen isn't closure. Out the start it's the Pearl Gates. Carrying worlds' weight on my shoulder Unfurling the swirl grid. Cumbersome. I've been up-and-up. Sucks The Grim Reapers dick squeeze. I'm his Number one crush. Take it to a neurological setting. Post-Apoco. You couldn't conjure or guess these It's a impossible. Jet streams. No plausible ending, like Osama in Red Sea. Feels like A wallop of confetti, swallows your head clean. Comparable. Each and every one of these follicles sweating And all you want is your current state atoned. Undermined delivered. Blurred, your time is hindered. When you're crushed. Innately fold The perfect time for shivers. Hey I heard your body escaped it's soul Mercy. I've tried to figure, why I'm hurt. Disgraced out cold. Cause your silver lining serpent, Isn't worth it's weight in gold sorry for taking long and not meeting the 20 lines I got sidetracked with a few things. Hope this is enough!