behind the screen

oats · 07-11-2013, 04:28 AM

and been met with disease. temperature freeze. textural dreams
intellectual retard writing text you believe
i've seen past lives reincarnate as a penciled reprieve
and futures cut short because they're measured in ki's
lost love and sacrificed a treasure for greed
to spend a single night inside of heaven's physique
followers are swallowers, its better to lead
everybody off that cliff into a sedative sea
the seconds that we spend behind electrical screens
are better spent dead until you're ready to breathe

fuck off. this was too dope. nobody else conveys human psychology as deftly or as effortlessly into real talk. your descriptions within lines like "backspace acrobatic" are just so vivid and well-conceived. I really enjoyed this, will be reading it many times over again.

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07-11-2013, 04:28 AM	#11
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	and been met with disease. temperature freeze. textural dreams intellectual retard writing text you believe i've seen past lives reincarnate as a penciled reprieve and futures cut short because they're measured in ki's lost love and sacrificed a treasure for greed to spend a single night inside of heaven's physique followers are swallowers, its better to lead everybody off that cliff into a sedative sea the seconds that we spend behind electrical screens are better spent dead until you're ready to breathe fuck off. this was too dope. nobody else conveys human psychology as deftly or as effortlessly into real talk. your descriptions within lines like "backspace acrobatic" are just so vivid and well-conceived. I really enjoyed this, will be reading it many times over again.