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Old 04-25-2025, 01:37 AM   #7
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you been nice, wise

this was butter

even some of the shit i didn't get sounded dope - iunno wtf throwing stars in the sky, miracle essence means, but i like the phrasing lol idk if that makes sense & idgaf, i know what i mean....the class issue line before that was cold.

the line that followed was some of my fav shit here too

Quote:
Life an escape room, most have a fear of the exit
But it's a funhouse. Goes forever like mirroring perspectives
the fun house - goes forever - mirror perspectives is just slick. but the line before, most have fear of the exit actually struck a chord more.

other shit i found resonant

Quote:
How many seconds on a clock? We ain't got much time
I blamed everyone else but I forgot what's mine
How much that soul worth? Under where the crow's perch
There is no birth.. no death
Journey within to where it glows best
mans out here coooooooking. talk that internal eternal timeless shit to em wise!

sheeesh

Quote:
Laid to rest? I still conversate with the dead
Or maybe I'm caught in disassociation's net
i read this as nest initially - in relation to the eagle line before it. i fuck w this line heavy though.

couple lines i didnt like, or disliked, but i dont care to really mention them - nothing was really whack or hurt the shit i did appreciate.


love.

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