Crucible

[Just Write]

The hour is used up, on cruise control
It's so unusual
The get-go is the most untruthful show
Up inside the carnival of this narrow crucible
Carbonyl in their arsenal aerosol

this was fresh

didn't like the middle too much, was kinda sporatic in terms of content, flow was butter tho


It's faith of the servant vs. face of the serpent
Mud in the gut, lunch served in the cup of the cusp
Be the sign rendered in the texture
Be the boy measured when the storm sweats the weather
Lament blood, bend shut the percent of treasure you surrendered

i liked this part too

you come off very abstract which isn't my style but you pull i t off pretty crisp. enjoyed most of this and I'll def peep your next drop. thanks again for the feed and advice