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07-27-2024, 01:01 PM
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Lime Life
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I really liked this. I was really impressed by how you played around with the rhyme scheme. It's something I love to do as well so I appreciated the technical ability required to move your rhymes about so much while maintaining the flow. You did a great job here and you should be proud of this verse.
Loved it.
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