Un-beautiful Life

JustRap · 10-08-2022, 08:30 PM

This was pretty dope I can dig the content, a pretty consistent piece as it goes for the story telling.
Fairly simple wording but there's nothing wrong with that could even
Be a dope audio maybe.
If I had to be nit-picky I'd say maybe make some more switch ups
To the flow/rhyme schemes but honestly for what it's worth it was pretty smooth and the transition you did have in there was good. Stay up, Genocide.

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10-08-2022, 08:30 PM	#8
JustRap Member Join Date: Jul 2022 Posts: 54 Rep Power: 0	This was pretty dope I can dig the content, a pretty consistent piece as it goes for the story telling. Fairly simple wording but there's nothing wrong with that could even Be a dope audio maybe. If I had to be nit-picky I'd say maybe make some more switch ups To the flow/rhyme schemes but honestly for what it's worth it was pretty smooth and the transition you did have in there was good. Stay up, Genocide.