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Old 06-18-2022, 07:42 PM   #5
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Eviction's verse is descent but Frank's goodness...his first few lines basically blew Eviction whole verse in the wind. Just read this, "agined the terrain of the plains
She seed herself sowing the bed: spudding the vine and dragging her rake through the grains"...this is lovely!!! and you can't deny it. Eviction's verse took me effort to go through, his rhymes were of point and he flexed nicely...but I had to utilize extra effort to get through his verse while Frank's verse I easily digested and enjoyed the ride due to the transition into relations with the subjects regarding how the words are supporting into the metamorphosis. Frank got this.
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