WEEK EIGHT: MIKE WRECKA (0-1) vs CANDY (2-5) MIKE WINS 4-0

Adverse · 05-30-2022, 04:37 PM

Candy - kind of the same song and dance this week from you family. At times I thought you were starting to break through and develop a dope concept, just like NYC was saying it kind of devolves into more of the same, exactly what we expect to see from you. I’d like to see some variety man, like you started with this week but then an actual commitment to a change of narrative

Wrecka - this was super simple IMO nothing really stood out but it was all coherent and was a smooth ride through and through. Read more like a poem here that may have been because of the shorter bars and straight to the facts context. Still thought this was ambiguous enough to satisfy readers but still safe enough to not travel too far from your comfort zone. Good work

Vote - Mike more consistent and just a better piece in general

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05-30-2022, 04:37 PM	#8
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Candy - kind of the same song and dance this week from you family. At times I thought you were starting to break through and develop a dope concept, just like NYC was saying it kind of devolves into more of the same, exactly what we expect to see from you. I’d like to see some variety man, like you started with this week but then an actual commitment to a change of narrative Wrecka - this was super simple IMO nothing really stood out but it was all coherent and was a smooth ride through and through. Read more like a poem here that may have been because of the shorter bars and straight to the facts context. Still thought this was ambiguous enough to satisfy readers but still safe enough to not travel too far from your comfort zone. Good work Vote - Mike more consistent and just a better piece in general