WEEK EIGHT CONTENDERS: EVICTION (5-1) vs OBJECTIVE (3-4) EVICTION WINS 3-0

Mike Wrecka · 05-29-2022, 01:58 PM

Eviction- I believe you are he who’s name shall not be spoken? This verse was better than any I’ve ever read from you. You have very long bars and in this particular instance it works well. And I’m not even entirely sure how since you don’t really use inners but it all flows smooth and is a smooth read. And sometimes your end rhymes don’t rhyme to me but that might be an accent discrepancy OR you just feel that every line doesn’t have to rhyme. Which is cool in my book. Overall nice verse

Objective - seems like you gave minimal effort here to avoid a no show. That’s commendable but i don’t have much to say about what you posted here. Respect for showing.

Mvgt - Eviction

05-29-2022, 01:58 PM	#7
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	Eviction- I believe you are he who’s name shall not be spoken? This verse was better than any I’ve ever read from you. You have very long bars and in this particular instance it works well. And I’m not even entirely sure how since you don’t really use inners but it all flows smooth and is a smooth read. And sometimes your end rhymes don’t rhyme to me but that might be an accent discrepancy OR you just feel that every line doesn’t have to rhyme. Which is cool in my book. Overall nice verse Objective - seems like you gave minimal effort here to avoid a no show. That’s commendable but i don’t have much to say about what you posted here. Respect for showing. Mvgt - Eviction __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

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