It Was A Dream...

Battle Hymns · 06-23-2013, 01:15 AM

I'm not surprised that you're like to write about that DARK shit.

I see that you liked watching the movie Old Boy. For some odd reason this piece gave that sort of evil feel. That movie depressed the shit out of me.

You're flow is decent but there is no harm in having a few multi syllabic rhymes

Other than that, the content was dope, it was well written and very graphic.

see what you like, when you can, the rest is a dream or a lie < -- Dope.. Enuff said

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06-23-2013, 01:15 AM	#9
Battle Hymns Loves Meth Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Some where in the city of CHI Posts: 243 Battle Record: 0-2 Accomplishments - Founding Father of Hip-Hop Rep Power: 37	I'm not surprised that you're like to write about that DARK shit. I see that you liked watching the movie Old Boy. For some odd reason this piece gave that sort of evil feel. That movie depressed the shit out of me. You're flow is decent but there is no harm in having a few multi syllabic rhymes Other than that, the content was dope, it was well written and very graphic. see what you like, when you can, the rest is a dream or a lie < -- Dope.. Enuff said