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Old 08-20-2021, 01:43 AM   #1
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lotta cool near-rhymes or slant rhymes. And syllable-matches.

Based on reading it multiple times, I thought it would rap better aloud. I was wrong. Could be just my own shortfall at rapping though.

Cool piece.
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Old 08-20-2021, 11:31 AM   #2
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Based on reading it multiple times, I thought it would rap better aloud. I was wrong.
Laughed a little at this, it’s very true.

Thanks for reading, all!
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