RBN PRESENTS: Dizaster vs Detour (Free for 30 days!!!)

detour · 06-21-2013, 07:16 PM

the feedback is appreciated...

i spit a little faster than i usually would in this one cuz i wanted to beat dizaster at his own game, i.e., that rapid fire back to back rhyme scheme shit...

an it's hard to always tell when to give the crowd a second an when to keep goin...i do try to be conscious of that, but i'm still perfecting things namean...

thanks for watchin it...lol @ the criticism of the "squares" voice hahaha...i tried somethin different there with the vocal inflection...worked on damn jafar...

but word, i definitely take all the advice in an do best with it what i can...i like usin the back to back compounds tho', i wouldn't be me if i didn't do that...

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06-21-2013, 07:16 PM	#1
detour Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 598 Accomplishments - Beat Diz (via Real Deal Handshake) Rep Power: 690963	the feedback is appreciated... i spit a little faster than i usually would in this one cuz i wanted to beat dizaster at his own game, i.e., that rapid fire back to back rhyme scheme shit... an it's hard to always tell when to give the crowd a second an when to keep goin...i do try to be conscious of that, but i'm still perfecting things namean... thanks for watchin it...lol @ the criticism of the "squares" voice hahaha...i tried somethin different there with the vocal inflection...worked on damn jafar... but word, i definitely take all the advice in an do best with it what i can...i like usin the back to back compounds tho', i wouldn't be me if i didn't do that...