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Old 02-06-2021, 11:25 PM   #2
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"Begin today!'' That's all the note said
as ''Tina'' woke up with the cold sweats
is your door locked? Go check
she sleeps naked but her soles wet
3rd time this week a random notes left
she felt it was time to notify police
what kinda of contriving creep
will sneak inside her bedroom twice to peek
must be someone battling demon ghost
that would leave such notes
There was no indication from where they came
for who or may was it a threat who's to say
vibes change as a pigeon landed on the window panes
her tight brains pulsating like migraines but ''Times Saved''
hand written in bright paint Had it been meant for someone else?
who would have to audacity to break in and touch my shelf
Now Tina's wide awake she put's on her sneakers
and gets startled by a hiding snake
it escaped under the door how could it find its way
looking around the room her minds a haze
off meds for 5 days I can't call mom she says the things I say
sound like im loosing screws sideways
For a moment, she thought it was a message from gran'pa lou
he smelled like a zoo before he died of the flu
said honey go follow your dreams guidance is truth
but ultimately she decided it was easier to ignore time while it flew
fighting with dudes delicate tyrant but her mind is abused
as she crumpled up the letters and threw them away
you herd the muffle of a stalkers silent chuckle soothe in decay


You know that tingly feeling you get on the back of your neck
like a lines being stepped it hides in your breath
I want to lie in her flesh just another creep hiding instead
touching myself watching her rising from bed
tina wasn't like other girls always tired and depressed
when talking with her it's like Im fighting the stress
like untying a knot of wires in a hoarders mess
that's what you get when you place your heart in a hornets nest
we only talk for a few minutes sometimes it's less
behind a register or behind a desk silent cry's for sex
she would never think the love I hides obsessed
one day she will bear my children form is blessed
You know I don't believe in sixth senses
but I sneak in her room every night and place six letters
the stalkers test...

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