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This was really close. I liked hotdog’s wording and swagger a fair amount more than Scout’s. Hotdog also had less stretched concepts that fell flat. But, Hotdog also closed soft.. his last 6 weren’t nearly as good as his verse before that.
Scouts shoot yourself in the foot, coyote with mange, and a couple others were solid concepts... but there was also forced stuff and I’m not a fan of wordplay unless it’s really well done and worded perfectly. In a close one, I think Hotdog won. Cool read.
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