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Old 10-21-2020, 11:58 AM   #13
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This was a tough one to call. I actually thought Inf’s concepts were about equal to Dave’s here.. There’s an awkwardness to Inf’s wording, but if he tightens that up, he could be a force, I’d think. Certainly as good as some others that get much more praise on here. The HAL line, Bends, the closer... I could see how those would hit much harder with better wording. As is, it was still a cool little verse.

Dave came worse than the last couple I’ve seen from him. I have no clue what the Peng punch means... and I’ve seen the going down in history done way too many times. But, there were still some solid concepts that were flipped a bit more creatively than Inf’s.. Southpaw, etc.

Dave wins, in a close one.
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