WEEK 3: Dave 1-1 VS INF 1-1 DAVE WINS
 

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Cool I’ll probably post tomorrow or tonight

I have Dave’s. Where you at @INF

Here. Will need a few

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city
Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me
Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps
Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air
U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low

This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss
And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog
Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends
Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men
Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw
Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?

INF:

"I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey"

- Gun bar excused for the creativity of this.

"U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low"


evaD:

"Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw"

- Very nice.

"Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?"

- Great closer.

Good battle here between two guys who definitely bring it. INF is solid all around, not many weaknesses but nothing too mind bending either. evaD started kind of slow with some played concepts (going down in history like Monica Lewinsky is a bar I read in 2003-2004 - and that was even done better) but finished really strong with two clever bars that I loved.

Vote - evaD

Inf

I liked your opener but not much else. I feel like your set ups are forced to be short when reading... like they almost don’t make sense good ideas though and you can still bring it on your day

Dave

Dave this was not your strongest either.
Fuck the dog was funny but a stretch.
D in men was not good
Southpaw and jarring were cool though

I’m gonna go evaD out of preference

Vote Dave

Almost stopped reading Dave's verse after the history line. That's actually an insult to my time. Circle left bar was dope. Jarring was cute.

After Inf first bar I was thinking great, another verse I wont get. Vegas loop was cool, 100 reps could've been good but was flex.. mattress could've been good but the wording was bad.

I'm voting tie here. Dont usually do this but I took off 7 points for Dave.

Inf get off the drugs bro


Or get a Rosetta Stone


10 years later and u still don’t speak English cmon bro


Vote dave

This was a tough one to call. I actually thought Inf’s concepts were about equal to Dave’s here.. There’s an awkwardness to Inf’s wording, but if he tightens that up, he could be a force, I’d think. Certainly as good as some others that get much more praise on here. The HAL line, Bends, the closer... I could see how those would hit much harder with better wording. As is, it was still a cool little verse.

Dave came worse than the last couple I’ve seen from him. I have no clue what the Peng punch means... and I’ve seen the going down in history done way too many times. But, there were still some solid concepts that were flipped a bit more creatively than Inf’s.. Southpaw, etc.

Dave wins, in a close one.

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
I didn’t see this movie so I did some reachsearch, results came back - NOT FOUND, in other words I still don’t get it
Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city
Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me
I don’t get this one either man, forgive me
Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps
pass
Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air
this one is gonna be a no for me
U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low
the mattress? You’re dissing his bed? I’m starting to think maybe it’s just me..


Vs


This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
wouldn’t it be the opposite? Doesn’t add up
Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss
And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog
im not familiar with the topic at hand
Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends
Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men
there isn’t a D in the word men, ok gigs up we deserve to know wtf is going on in this battle
Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw
finally, I was beginning to think this was some sort of sick joke. Nice bar
Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?
huge reach, place this bar on the same shelf as the pickled heads


This was honestly a very tough read and difficult battle to vote on. Didn’t quite enjoy much and it all came down to one good line in this entire battle. Gonna go ahead and vote for Dave.


Dave

Elon

Vs

Southpaw
Jarring

Closer than I expected. Not the best from you guys but serviceable.

Vote Dave

This battle had a lot of potential on paper but neither of you guys seemed at full strength here

The HAL bar to start your verse Inf was dope but then You got redundant and I really didn’t feel much else. Could tell this one was rushed tbh mattress was the only other maybe okay bar

Dave came a cut below his usual as well tbh which yes off weeks happen But I just didn’t enjoy much some generic lines then Southpaw was dope and the rest was low tier though d in men got a chuckle out of me

Think I’ll lean more towards David as his misses weren’t as bad

V/Davey

Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw


vs.

Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps

v/dave. i've seen fire shit from both before idkk.

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
cooll i get this

Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city
Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me
okk

Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps
lol stretched

Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air
mild

U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low
i like thi

vs.


This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
lol

Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss
And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog
eh

Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends
Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men
yoo i dont get this dave

Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw
cool

Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?
decent

inf had some good ideas but couldve used a better execution.. but dave has the edge here being more direct and consistent in the wording. love for both, inf and dave. v/dave

dave maybe you should have said he loves the D of Dave and that would have been fireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

or maybe not

Inf -

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air

Cool. Nothing really grand/super dope. Opener was good, Bends has some wording issues but the concept is fire, so I gave it to you.

Dave -

This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw

Same as Inf, really. One good bar, in the opener, and one that needs a slight reword to really reach full potential.

Close battle honestly. I'm gonna give it to Dave SLIGHTLY due to wording. This really could go either way, though.


V - Dave

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
delivered a bit clunky but man this concept is fireee....dope out of the box nameplay tbh, i really like it for a gun bar
Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city
Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me
love this concept...wouldve preferred if he was from there tbh but fresh idea i think is creative.. wording was good enough here
Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps
dece swag here and i appreciate the original concept.. really dont like the multi setup/wording but concept still cool
Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air
fuck this is creative.. alot going on here but the bends concept tying into the setup worked, a bit all over the place but i can appreciate this concept being tough to pull off...this is cool to me
U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low
ehhh nah not feeling this one personally


Vs


This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
lol i think this is jokes to me
Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss
And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog
ehhh nah, appreciate the originality but im not a fan of the concept
Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends
Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men
lolish, this was dece
Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw
fuck this is fire... dope bar and great concept
Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?
nice this is pretty cool.. false teeth or something along those lines i think wouldve been a bit more effective then "pickling" a head.. but this is my kindve bar i like the wit here


Feel bad for INF to be honest i think he has some great concepts here that are being missed... That opening Dave nameplay is fire to me, very creative and original... Hyperloop idea was awesome and delivered well, Bench Warm flex was jokes and good swag, and the bends while a bit all over the place is dope af conceptually
Dave opener was funny to me, i guess ppl dont like humor anymore.. Southpaw was dope af, prob lotb tho personally INF's opening nameplay matches it... Jarring cool too i like the idea

Yeah i'm going against the grain here I think INF did just enough to take this, in a battle that i think is a lot better then it's getting credit for....props to both

Vote INF